Sunday, 26 August 2018

Flash fiction (live - off-the-cuff example) today 26th August (early hours before going back to bed)


Title: The Plot (Flash fiction in under 700 words)
By: Tim J Rhohn-Sayers

We four agreed that we would use WhatsApp for all our communications as it is end-to-end encrypted – meaning nobody could ever know what content we were exchanging. The more thoughtful and intellectual of the four of us was Mustafa and he was concerned that MI 5 might have made some deal with the owners of WhatsApp to decrypt messages that they believed were involved in terrorism plots but we were assured by our comrades that that was not the case – so we went ahead and blindly used the app for everything.

We each had a role to play and we were very organised. We all met at uni – well that’s not strictly true as we met at The Mosque but then found out that we were all at the same uni – Sheffield Hallam and two of us were on the same course – Electrical and Electronic Engineering. It doesn’t really matter what the other two were doing at uni – they’d dropped out anyway. – Dropped out and went ‘under the radar’ for training in Syria.

We four were (are) devout Muslims and we would, we hoped, give our lives to Allah (Peach Be Upon Him) and The Muslim faith. That was our goal and our shared vision.

We made a mistake early on I think. We got too close to a couple of white boys that one of us had been to school with. They weren’t boys actually – well in their twenties like us. Richard Thompson, a delivery van driver and Mike Hampton who worked for Amazon. They seemed like OK guys and they respected us and our faith – in fact Richard said that he might convert, so I worked on him for months but it turned bad.

The plan was simple and we did not have any hang-ups – we all wanted to make sure that The British Government would never forget what we did for our faith.

I was pushing for using Richard’s van for a killing spree but needless to say Mustafa had a much grander idea and he being just a bit older, cleverer than us, he got his way. He along with Mo (Mohammed Abboud), the two uni lads and still seen as mainstream by the authorities were working on a bomb plot – in fact even building the bomb.

We met every few days, sometimes even with Richard but it would always be somewhere safe and we would always be watching for eyes – others watching us. We would always get rid of Richard as quickly as possible and then move on somewhere else – usually Mo’s flat and we’d get all the plans out.

Months went by and I was getting impatient. I had friends that had an idea what we were about and they’d pressure me – tried to prise information from me. Don’t get me wrong here – these were OK, good Muslims, no infiltrations – they just wanted action – to show the British that we mattered.
We were one week off doing it.

Mo seemed hesitant for the last couple of weeks and I wondered if he was scared. We had all prayed together and we had all shouted out our commitment to the faith and to spreading the faith. We all had equal commitment to the eventual setting-up of a Muslim state, just like Israel got what they wanted: The Jews had their land – we would have ours. Ideally that land would be Britain – The UK – but it would take time and we would be dead but Allah (Peace Be Upon Him) would see this come to fruition.

I was fast asleep when I heard a bang. Then another much louder bang. It was my bedroom door being smashed-in.

A dozen men with guns in black uniforms forced me down again onto the bed covers. They all shouted at me. I was still half asleep.

That was three days ago. We were all arrested and interrogated separately. They knew – but how did they know?

Finally, Richard Thompson walked in and faced me in the interview room. He was in Police uniform.

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